Monday 7 September 2020

Story about me

 Hi there

Today I have Been writing about a story about me

and this is the work that I have been working on

Anyways I hope you's enjoy my work 

And if you's see anything that is rong then leave a comment


   

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2 comments:

  1. Phil @ Ako Hiko7 September 2020 at 20:49

    Malo e lelei Sonny. I enjoyed reading your story and I like the way you are asking for feedback. It's not something that's wrong but my tip would be to use some interesting words to start your sentences so you're not saying 'then' all the time. Also, do you know how to embed your doc so that if you change your doc it changes on your blog? There's a video here that shows you how: Ako Hiko Site

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    1. Anonymous10 September 2020 at 19:45

      Thank you so much Phil😉 for the feedback

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