This year we have been reading a artick and we have been writing how to save the ocean and this is my one that I have been writing about. And I hope you enjoy it. But I agree with Teone to because there are rubbish in the sea to. Why I agree with him is because he has seen it before so he knows that people have been throwing their rubbish into the ocean and there rubbish that they have been throwing into the sea are killing sea animals. So that is why I agree with him.
Hello there Sonny,
ReplyDeleteIt's Daniel from May Road School, and I liked you have wrote about of how Teone thought about the ocean. It was a nice detailed work you have did writing you have done, and I have no questions for you. Keep it up.
Kind Regards: Daniel
hello sonny. I am Lefine, I am from may road just like you and I really like your background and how you wrote agree or disagree and I agree, we should stop thorwing rubbish anywhere, and two things I noticed is that you said artick do you mean article and have you been doing this for a year?.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards-Lefine